Talk:A Fallout FanFiction/@comment-184.13.196.58-20140728043222

Uh, this fan fiction is good, but Cywren didn't act like cywren, and a lot of weird spelling errors, and a lot of spaces in between words, e.b: But (empty) couldnt get it.

If this was made as a real piece, i give it 7/10, if sarcastic, 9/10.